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Here's a Storyline I just wrote. Took me like an hour or so. It's for my secret mod
But some of you already know about it. I just hope it's not too long
please don't fall a sleep while reading it! :sleep:
It's 1940 and the war over europe is raging.
Jews from all over europe are being prosecuted and sent to Consentration camps by the Nazis.
Nothing stops the Nazi Slaughter machine from killing the innocent Jews.
America and the united nations that have already heard of the slaughter does not do anything to stop it
Since they have other obligations in this war.
The year is 1941 and the Nazis have already killed millions by now...
Jews and Non-Jews alike. But somewhere, in one of the camps a group of death defying Jews
That have nothing to live for anymore had enough of sitting and waiting for their doomsday,
And decided to form a resistance that will libirate the camp. You, Zishe Breitbart.
The Founder of the Resistance. Decide to recruit your fellow Jews and other Russian POWs
(Since it was a mixed up camp..) so together you could end the misery or at least die trying!
And to die a heroes death!
The plan was simple. Zishe was working as a blacksmith in the near by labor camp,
That was just next to the SS Barracks. So you, and a group of two other man decided
To sneak into the Barracks while the SS guards were not watching. The time has come
And you were about sneak into the barracks, when suddenly. The alarm has been raised!
Your mission has been Compromised in a matter of seconds a barrage of screaming MG42 bullets
Have been shot near your legs so you wont move. There was nothing you could do..
The SS men were all over you. Outgunned and outnumbered you decided to give in...
After a several hours you've been awaken by a foul kick to the ribs.
You raised your head, only to discover that you've been taken into the interigation block..
You took a real bad hit to the back of the head without even noticing.
Suddenly a light bolb lit up. without a warning two huge Guards lifted you up on the chair
And went out the door. You found yourself in this little dank room infront of a cold steel table.
The only sound you heard was the screams of other men being tortured, like the devil's orchestra.
After a few hours without a way out and without any water or food the door was slowly opened
You will never forget this Rusted noise when that Big blood soaked door was opened..
There he was, Sgt. Adolf Gruber. The maniacal torturer of the SS that knew no remorse
Or any respect for the living life.. "Do you know why I'm here you little swine?"
Asked the Sgt. With his freezing voice... "I don't really care! you goose steppin bastard!
Nothing that you'll do will never make me talk!" "Ahh.. In that case. I really don't need you to talk.
Since you're Jewish "friend" from the Resistance has already opened his mouth for a little fee of moldy bread.."
"The Bastard!" "Silence!" Yelled the Sgt. "You're going to be a special guest of mine my little friend. A very special friend indeed.."
"You are about to be the first number in Totenburg. Oh yes.. Your torture will be legendary, Even in HELL!"
The Sgt. yelled again with his Grim voice. "Why You!....*THUMP* Bast...ard... Ahhh..." Said Zishe just before they ran his light off
With the back of the Mauser..
The only thing you could partly hear are those next lines..
Sgt. Adolf Gruber: "Take care of my guest, and don't forget to bring me my special tools! We need to transport him fast to Totenburg
I still have a meeting to take part in in Berlin. And I want to pleasure myself a bit before I go."
SS Guard: "Jawohl mein commandant!"
SS Guard: "Heil Hitler!"
Sgt. Adolf Gruber: "Heil Hitler..."
Then you fainted again..
Awaken in a small dank and grey cell you find yourself imprisoned in Totenburg
The Notorious Castle of Death. With the stench of death everywhere you look behind you
Only to find the remains of you so called budy that stabed you in the back..
You could hear the SS Guards coming towards your cell. To take you
to a little trip in Tortureville.. But this time you werent gonna go without a fight.
You grabbed one of Adriano's ribs so you could use it as a sharp
Tool to cut through the Guards meat.. Just as the door open you run and
Cover, Standing to the left of the door you surprise the guard with a killing stab to the neck
And you slit his throat. Taking his knife and Luger just before the other guards are coming to get you!
Are you ready for this epic battle? Are you tough enough to survive Totenburg and live to tell the tale?
Hungry for Vengance, a true warrior you embrak on this mission to Hunt down and Exterminate those who imprisioned you
And Are now Slaughtering your people. May HaShem (= GOD in Hebrew) be with you Zishe Breitbart...
)Here's a Storyline I just wrote. Took me like an hour or so. It's for my secret mod
But some of you already know about it. I just hope it's not too long
please don't fall a sleep while reading it! :sleep:It's 1940 and the war over europe is raging.
Jews from all over europe are being prosecuted and sent to Consentration camps by the Nazis.
Nothing stops the Nazi Slaughter machine from killing the innocent Jews.
America and the united nations that have already heard of the slaughter does not do anything to stop it
Since they have other obligations in this war.
The year is 1941 and the Nazis have already killed millions by now...
Jews and Non-Jews alike. But somewhere, in one of the camps a group of death defying Jews
That have nothing to live for anymore had enough of sitting and waiting for their doomsday,
And decided to form a resistance that will libirate the camp. You, Zishe Breitbart.
The Founder of the Resistance. Decide to recruit your fellow Jews and other Russian POWs
(Since it was a mixed up camp..) so together you could end the misery or at least die trying!
And to die a heroes death!
The plan was simple. Zishe was working as a blacksmith in the near by labor camp,
That was just next to the SS Barracks. So you, and a group of two other man decided
To sneak into the Barracks while the SS guards were not watching. The time has come
And you were about sneak into the barracks, when suddenly. The alarm has been raised!
Your mission has been Compromised in a matter of seconds a barrage of screaming MG42 bullets
Have been shot near your legs so you wont move. There was nothing you could do..
The SS men were all over you. Outgunned and outnumbered you decided to give in...
After a several hours you've been awaken by a foul kick to the ribs.
You raised your head, only to discover that you've been taken into the interigation block..
You took a real bad hit to the back of the head without even noticing.
Suddenly a light bolb lit up. without a warning two huge Guards lifted you up on the chair
And went out the door. You found yourself in this little dank room infront of a cold steel table.
The only sound you heard was the screams of other men being tortured, like the devil's orchestra.
After a few hours without a way out and without any water or food the door was slowly opened
You will never forget this Rusted noise when that Big blood soaked door was opened..
There he was, Sgt. Adolf Gruber. The maniacal torturer of the SS that knew no remorse
Or any respect for the living life.. "Do you know why I'm here you little swine?"
Asked the Sgt. With his freezing voice... "I don't really care! you goose steppin bastard!
Nothing that you'll do will never make me talk!" "Ahh.. In that case. I really don't need you to talk.
Since you're Jewish "friend" from the Resistance has already opened his mouth for a little fee of moldy bread.."
"The Bastard!" "Silence!" Yelled the Sgt. "You're going to be a special guest of mine my little friend. A very special friend indeed.."
"You are about to be the first number in Totenburg. Oh yes.. Your torture will be legendary, Even in HELL!"
The Sgt. yelled again with his Grim voice. "Why You!....*THUMP* Bast...ard... Ahhh..." Said Zishe just before they ran his light off
With the back of the Mauser..
The only thing you could partly hear are those next lines..
Sgt. Adolf Gruber: "Take care of my guest, and don't forget to bring me my special tools! We need to transport him fast to Totenburg
I still have a meeting to take part in in Berlin. And I want to pleasure myself a bit before I go."
SS Guard: "Jawohl mein commandant!"
SS Guard: "Heil Hitler!"
Sgt. Adolf Gruber: "Heil Hitler..."
Then you fainted again..
Awaken in a small dank and grey cell you find yourself imprisoned in Totenburg
The Notorious Castle of Death. With the stench of death everywhere you look behind you
Only to find the remains of you so called budy that stabed you in the back..
You could hear the SS Guards coming towards your cell. To take you
to a little trip in Tortureville.. But this time you werent gonna go without a fight.
You grabbed one of Adriano's ribs so you could use it as a sharp
Tool to cut through the Guards meat.. Just as the door open you run and
Cover, Standing to the left of the door you surprise the guard with a killing stab to the neck
And you slit his throat. Taking his knife and Luger just before the other guards are coming to get you!
Are you ready for this epic battle? Are you tough enough to survive Totenburg and live to tell the tale?
Hungry for Vengance, a true warrior you embrak on this mission to Hunt down and Exterminate those who imprisioned you
And Are now Slaughtering your people. May HaShem (= GOD in Hebrew) be with you Zishe Breitbart...
Last edited by Raziel on Mon May 05, 2008 2:20 pm; edited 1 time in total
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